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©2008-2009 =Cacodaemonia
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EDIT: Just updating this file for a critique.

I found some time today to work on this. Several people had pointed out that the top of the image was too bright, which was detracting from where I wanted the focus to be. When you're looking at the surface of water from underneath, it can basically do one of two things: either show a warped version of whatever is on the other side, or reflect what's below the water. I decided to go with the reflection, since it just pulls elements from the rest of the painting. Do you think it works?

Oh, and I know that I haven't painted in the otter's reflections yet. I work pretty randomly. 8|

As always, con/crit is much appreciated!

Painter X, 2008.

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:icontaylorsaville:
This is awesome! I adore it. Great work. :heart:

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:icondianamiite:
i like the reflection. it makes it seem more mysterious and gives it that beautiful curiosity i get whenever I see the picture~ <3

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:iconcs-chan:
:arc: that looks wonderful :hug:
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:iconcacodaemonia:
Thanks! ^^

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:iconcacodaemonia:
I thought it might help to sort of isolate the scene from the rest of the world. Thanks for the comment! :)

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:iconcacodaemonia:
Thank you! :)

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:iconcs-chan:
:smooch: oh, yes you're welcome :kiss::hug::glomp::strip:

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:iconf1ymordecai:
i think the reflections work :)

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:iconunicorn-skydancer08:
Holy mackerel, that's amazing! :faint: I could never do something like that! You're a legend, my friend!

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:iconbob-artist:
Ooh, I can tell this is going to be an awesome illustration! (well, it already is. ^_^) I love the atmosphere you're getting with this - like a secret little world of playful otters. Besides that, you really can't go wrong with an illustration of otters. ^_^

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